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sequence is 4,3,2,1.
ReplyDeleteIt's funny the way it accepts files.
Banner is looking good. I think you can remove the frame which says "Looking for a new place..."
ReplyDeleteInstead, tweak the "User-friendly" line to reference where the viewer is... (something like: User-friendly banking, available HERE, on your laptop)
Then you'll just have the three frames, which gets to the point faster.
We will change the line to be: User-friendly right here at your fingertips.
ReplyDeleteFeels like that line needs punctuation somewhere. Also, I liked the laptop reference you had before - as opposed to fingertips.
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