Ad 1:
Respect yourself in the morning, at night and on weekends.
Boost Mobile Pay as you Go phones don’t limit the amount of calls you make on your phone. With no contracts you never pay for more than you want. Respect yourself and your minutes.
Tag: Talk Responsibly.
DISCOUNT: Purchase 30 minutes and we will add another 60 minutes to your phone. Respect that.
Ad 2:
Take it one day at a time. At 10 cents a minute.
Learning to control your spending is a step forward in the right direction. With Boost Mobile Pay as you Go phones you aren’t limited by contracts, fees or unwanted minutes. Regret yesterday, not today.
Talk Responsibly.
DISCOUNT: Recommend 3 friends to Boost and receive 3o minutes added to your phone. Regret nothing.
Ad3:
Free yourself from weakness, and your excess minutes.
Boost Mobile Pay as you Go Phones don’t limit your talking time by making you be part of a contract. You only pay for the minutes you want to use. Free yourself and get control of your life all at the same time.
Talk Responsibly.
DISCOUNT: Get more minutes to enjoy. Purchase an hour of talking time and receive another 2 hours added by us. Enjoy your freedom.
Nice job. This campaign is really improving. I think that if you just tighten a few things, you'll be good to go.
ReplyDelete#1
Love the headline and the last sentence of the body copy. The first sentence of body copy needs work. If possible, try not to repeat words, like 'phone.'
#2
Headline's working great. Copy's improving. I'd suggest changing the last sentence to something positive ("No regrets.") Offer on this one has an awkward sentence structure. Please revisit.
#3
Body copy still feels awkward. You won't 'be part of a contract.' Consider revising per our discussion in class - keep the idea, change the wording. Last sentence could be more succinct. Shorten offer.