Here are some revised bodycopy options and some copy for the envelopes for MyFamily.com. PLEASE ignore the pink highlighting.
Revised Mother’s Day card bodycopy:
Give her something she really does want – to hear from you more often. Stay connected with mom, dad, and even your crazy great-aunt at MyFamily.com. Post pictures, record voice messages, listen to advice from people who’ve been making the same mistakes for 40 years. It’s free to get started, and easy to use. Go to MyFamily.com to find out more.
Give her something she really does want – to hear from you more often. Stay connected with mom, dad, and even your crazy great-aunt at MyFamily.com. Post pictures, record voice messages, get advice you never even asked for. It’s free to get started, and easy to use. Go to MyFamily.com to find out more.
Give her something she really does want – to hear from you more often. Stay connected with mom, dad, and even your crazy great-aunt at MyFamily.com. Post pictures, record voice messages, show them you once and for all that you really do have a job. It’s free to get started, and easy to use. Go to MyFamily.com to find out more.
Give her something she really does want – to hear from you more often. Stay connected with mom, dad, and even your crazy great-aunt at MyFamily.com. Post pictures, record voice messages, get career advice from people who haven’t worked since the Ford administration. It’s free to get started, and easy to use. Go to MyFamily.com to find out more.
Give her something she really does want – to hear from you more often. Stay connected with mom, dad, and even your crazy great-aunt at MyFamily.com. Post pictures, record voice messages, get career advice from people who spend their days playing shuffleboard.. It’s free to get started, and easy to use. Go to MyFamily.com to find out more.
Envelopes:
Thanksgiving: Happy Thanksgiving
Season’s Greetings: Holiday Greetings
Mother’s Day: A Mother’s Day Wish
"...same mistakes for 40 years" doesn't sound positive. Can you reframe?
ReplyDelete'Season's Greetings' envelope should say just that. Holiday greetings isn't as standard.
'A Mother's Day Wish' envelope doesn't feel like it's following the same format as the other two.