Is this working out once it's folded? Since a big part of the concept was the reveal of the folds, I suggest printing out a copy and making sure everything reads in each panel. Also, some items feel like they're floating. Can you anchor them more? The animal illustrations in the top one aren't working. Can you grab other items to place in there? Lastly, is there anything cool you can do with the offer barcode? Definitely need to say % off otherwise the viewer won't know what it's for.
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Is this working out once it's folded? Since a big part of the concept was the reveal of the folds, I suggest printing out a copy and making sure everything reads in each panel. Also, some items feel like they're floating. Can you anchor them more? The animal illustrations in the top one aren't working. Can you grab other items to place in there? Lastly, is there anything cool you can do with the offer barcode? Definitely need to say % off otherwise the viewer won't know what it's for.
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