Thursday, July 30, 2009

Liana and Pla's revised Lloyds TSB

Lloyds:

Ad1:

Front: Your money can do many things.

Pull out: Including grow.

Subhead: Lloyds TSB can help you manage your money and learn to focus on what you really want in life.

Get $20 today when you open a student checking account.

Back of card:

Manage your money easily with our helpful tools. Open an account and you qualify for:

  • Free text alerts when your balance is getting low
  • Our Save the Change program that helps you hold onto your pennies
  • Savings and budget calculators to manage your spending

CTA: Focus on your goals at lloydstsb.com.

TAG: Reach your goals.

Ad 2:

Front: managing your money can be easy.

Pull out: When you can see your goal.

Subhead: By opening an account with Lloyds TSB you can see how quickly your money can grow.

Open an account today and receive and extra $20.

Back of card:

Helpful ways to ensure you have control of your growth. We don’t call them discounts, we prefer perks:

  • Discounts at 4,000 hostels around the world
  • 35 free music downloads from eMusic
  • Free texts alerts when your balance is getting low

CTA:Learn how to make you money thrive at lloydstsb.com

TAG: Reach your goals.

Ad 3:

Front:

Be the kind of person who makes money.

Pull out: And knows how to keep it.

Subhead: Manage your money wisely with Lloyds TSB and hold on to what you earned.

Open an account and receive and extra $20.

Back of card: Ensure that you hold on to your money with these helpful tools:

  • $200 interest-free overdraft protection
  • Our Save the Change program that helps you hold on to your pennies
  • Commission-free foreign currency

CTA: Hold on to you money at lloydstsb.com

TAG: Reach your goals.

1 comment:

  1. Front of Ad 2 needs a capital 'M'

    Back of card: 'Helpful ways to ensure you have control of your growth' doesn't make sense as worded.

    CTA has type-o: Learn how to make youR money thrive at lloydstsb.com

    'Open an account and receive and extra $20.' (delete 'an extra')

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