**Everywhere it shows a $ I am meaning to put the symbol for pounds. I just don’t know where to find it on my computer.
1.
Front before pull out:
Managing your money can be easy.
Pull out:
When you can see your goal it seems effortless.
Sub head: Lloyds TSB can help you manage your money and learn to focus on what you really want in life.
Discount: Open an account and receive and extra $20.
Back of card:
Lloyds TSB helps you manage your money the way you like:
- Free text alerts when your balance is getting low.
- Save the Change program that helps you save every time your use your Debit Card.
- Savings and Budget Calculator to manage your spending.
CTA: Visit lloydstsb.com to learn how to focus on your goal.
TAG: Reach your goals.
2.
Front:
Your money can do many things in a bank.
Pull out: One of which is grow.
Subhead: By opening an account with Lloyds TSB you can see how quickly keeping your money in one place can make it grow.
Discount: Open an account and receive and extra $20.
Back of card:
Lloyds TSB gives likes to help you wherever we can:
- Discounts at 4,000 hostels around the world.
- 35 free music downloads from eMusic.
- Free text alerts when your balance is getting low.
CTA: Visit lloydstsb.com to learn how to make your money thrive.
TAG: Reach your goals.
3.
Front:
Be someone who makes money.
Pull out:
Be the person who knows how to keep it.
Sub head:
Manage your money wisely with Lloyds TSB and you can earn the respect you deserve.
Discount: Open an account and receive and extra $20.
Back of card:
Lloyds TSB can help you earn the respect and money you have worked so hard to get:
- $200 interest-free overdraft protection.
- Save the Change program that saves you money every time you use your Debit Card.
- Commission free foreign currency.
CTA: Visit lloydstsb.com to learn how to earn respect.
TAG: Reach your goals.
Getting closer. Still like old version of this head better:
ReplyDeleteYour money can do many things in a bank.
One of which is grow.
The 'in a bank' part is awkward.
The first lines on back of cards also could be improved. Still don't get the respect angle.
Please review previous comments. I know we've talked about this a lot but I still think the headlines need to work harder: getting to the point quickly, paying off the 20 pounds, making sense of the blurry images on the pullout.
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