Sunday, July 26, 2009

Dell copy / Brad and Ming

1: at play

Smaller than your headphones, with room for a symphony.

Meet the Mini 10 and the Mini 10V. Full of features, but light on price, it’s the mobile entertainment system that includes:

  • A keyboard 92% the size of a traditional keyboard for easy typing
  • A beautiful 10.1” display with 16.9 aspect ratio
  • Next generation WiFi connectivity
  • A multi-touch trackpad
  • Built in GPS
  • 7 colors to choose from

Find out more at

dell.com/mini10

Purchase a Mini 10 or Mini 10V and get 3 months of AT&T wireless service free.

1: at work

Get more out of your briefcase.

Meet the Mini 10 and Mini 10V. The mobile workhorse that leaves room on your lap for your lunch, and includes:

  • A keyboard 92% the size of a traditional keyboard for easy typing
  • A beautiful 10.1” display with 16.9 aspect ratio
  • Next generation WiFi connectivity
  • A multi-touch trackpad
  • Built in GPS
  • 7 colors to choose from

Find out more at

dell.com/mini10

Purchase a Mini 10 or Mini 10V and get a free carrying case.

1: at school

Heavy reading is easier to handle at 3lbs.

Meet the Mini 10 and Mini 10V. The classroom companion that’s up for any all-nighter and includes:

  • A keyboard 92% the size of a traditional keyboard for easy typing
  • A beautiful 10.1” display with 16.9 aspect ratio
  • Next generation WiFi connectivity
  • A multi-touch trackpad
  • Built in GPS
  • 7 colors to choose from

Find out more at

dell.com/mini10

Purchase a Mini 10 or Mini 10V and get 10% the purchase of a wireless printer from Dell.

1 comment:

  1. Nice work. Can you adjust the bullets to pull specific benefits for each of the categories: school, play and work? Also, I'd suggest adding a third line to the intro paragraph or adding a subhead so you can get rid of the 'including.' It feels like that word is just tacked on.

    Can you make the second headline (Get more out of your briefcase) as interesting as the first and third? The others have such nice comparisons.

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