Have you decided to go back to the previous direction? Brad - your old lines were stronger, as discussed in class. Verdang - the flourishes on these comps don't feel like they go with the concept or client. Can you come up with other graphic elements to use? Also, can you come up with a more striking visual than a person on a bike?
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Have you decided to go back to the previous direction? Brad - your old lines were stronger, as discussed in class. Verdang - the flourishes on these comps don't feel like they go with the concept or client. Can you come up with other graphic elements to use? Also, can you come up with a more striking visual than a person on a bike?
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